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    November 03

    又來一隻歌詞....定新詩?~知已~

    小弟文字太差....請多作指導
    送給我一位朋友的
     
    《知已》
     
    當失戀傷心流淚的一刻
    當歡欣開心大笑的一霎那
    心中只想跟你分享與分擔
     
    知已     這種生物太神奇
    仿佛心中另一個自己
    時刻對你照顧入微
    一生使你念記
     
    當人生走到低無可低失意的時間
    當自我頂峯忘形的白鴿眼時期
    總有一位在身邊
    為你作出鼓勵與批評
    絕對直接無面俾
     
    知已   這種生物太神奇
    仿佛生命中另一個自己
    時刻睇透你  監察你
    一生令你記起
     
    知已   這種生物太神奇
    仿佛你我永遠是一起
    使我一生永記
     
    即使走到最後   閉眼的一刻
    也會深深念記
     
    希望下世仍與你一起
    與我再做一對
    難得的知已
     
     
     
     

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